Is my plot okay? (Serious Teen Thriller)?

i read a little more than half of it, and LOVED IT! (if i loved it so much, then why didn't i read the whole thing? the computer screen hurts my eyes if i stare at it for too long) i definetely think that there's potential, though, as you're probably aware, it is very difficult to get a young adult book published when it has actually been written by somebody with talent and appreciation for literature. in other words, people like vampires and crap like twilight. however, i liked it, and i'm pretty much a book snob, so that means that it's good. good luck to you, and i hope to see it published eventually!